你看着删减和增加一些吧
TodayisMayDay.MyparentsandIwenttoparktohaveapicnic.Wetookjuice,fruit,andsomanydelicious(美味的)food.Intheafternoon,wewenttovisitmygrandparents.Ihelpedgrandpatodosomehousework.Ateighto’clockwewenthome,IwasverytierdsoIwenttobedearly,butIwasveryhappy!
我是初三的