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雅思作文求批改~(希望专业一点哦~)

SomepeoplethinkthatcomputersandtheInternetareimportantresourcesforstudents,whileothersthinkthatstudentsshouldlearnfromtheirteachers.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

ComputersandtheInternettransformthesociety,bringingtheinformationage.Astheyareappliedtostudyaspectmorefrequently,somepeoplebelievecomputersandinternetisthenecessarytoolforstudents,whileothersclaimthattheteacherplaysamoreimportantroleinstudents’learning.

PeopleholdtheviewthatcomputersandtheInternetaresignificantforstudentsthinkthatthosewhocannotutilizecomputertechnologyhaveanobviousshortage,becausetheywillmisslotsofup-to-dateinformationandlosstheresources.Inotherwords,thosestudentstendtooutofdate.Withoutinternet,itisharderforstudenttocollectdatafortheirlearning,andtheefficiencyofstudywoulddecrease.Makingfulluseofinternetcannotonlyallowtheconveniencetostudents,butalsoreflectstheabilitytocatchthepeceofrapiddevelopingsociety.

Othersbelievethefunctionofteachercannotbereplacedbycomputer.Althoughtheadvanceofcomputertechnologybroughtconveniencetostudy,italsocausedsometroublethatneverhappenedbefore.Forinstance,studentswhoaddictedtocomputergamesaremorelikelybadatlearningknowledgeandevencommitcrime.Afterall,computerisamachine.Itcannotplaytherolelikeateacher,whocanadministerstudents,communicatewiththem,listentotheiremotionandguidethem.

AsfarasIamconcerned,computertechnologyshouldbeutilizedinstudyaspectwhileteacherplaysthemainroletotechstudents.Admittedly,computercanbereallyhelpfulifstudentsuseitinanaptway.However,humanemotioncannotbeunderstoodbycomputermachine,whiletheteachercan.Theteacherisapttoknowwhattherealneedofthestudentsis.Andtheyarealwaysthebesttoteachstudentshowtolearn.

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