帮忙~英语作文挑错~或者是哪看着别扭
Imetmywifetotallybyaccident,butIfellinlovewithheratthefirstsight.
Itwasadelightfulwinternight,nocoldwindandthebothersomenoise,thatIdecidedtohangouttorelaxmypoornervestightenedbythoseworkaffairsforalongtime.
Staringonmyshadowunderstreetlampswhichturnedlongandshort,Icouldevenheartheshadow’scheersforsuchacheerfulbreakfromtheheavywork.“Oh,itmusthaveshortenedmylifetime.”Thinkingofthework,Icomplained.
“Don’tworry,youwilllivelong.”Awoman’svoicecametomesuddenly.
Iturnedaroundstraightway,andtherewasatallgirldressedinwhitestandingrightbyme.Herhairwaterfallagainstthelight-colouredskinhangsdownandherattractiveeyescatchedmyattention.
“I’mXieBi-anandwouldyoudomeafavour?”shesaid.
“Ofcourse.Whatisit?”
“Igetlostwithmybrother,whoisalittleshortwithdarkskin.Couldyouhelpmelookforhim?Youknow,I’msomewhatscaredinthesedarknights.
“Ok,”Ismiled,“Isthereanyotherfeatureaboutyoubrother?”
“Huh…hewearsatophat,likethis.”Sheconjuredawiredtophatatthesametime.Ilookedathersurprisely,andshejustsmiledandstuckhertongue.“Suchafunnygirl.”Ithought.
“Ievendon’tknowyourname.”Shesaid.
“Oh,XiaoMing…Wow,lookthere,isheyourbrother?”Ipointedatamanwithoverhighhathittingtowardus.
“Terrific.He’smybrotherFanWu-jiu.Ican’tfinishmytaskwithouthimtonight.”Shebreathedasighofrelief.
“Yourtask?”
“Yeah,nowIhavetobacktomywork.”Sheshotaglanceatherbrotherandcontinued,“Itisreallynicetomeetyou.”
“CouldIseeyouagain?”Ilikedthisgirlandblurtedout.
“Ofcourse,wemustseeeachothersomeday.Bye,XiaoMing.”Shewavedherhandasshewaswalkingaway.
Tomorrow,IstillthoughtofthemysticalgirlwhileIwaspassinganeighborwhosefamilywerepreparingforafuneral.
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